Narrative writing

LI: to write a narrative use descriptive words to make our stories more exiting.
Today I made a narrative to make it exciting with some paragraph and is also 40 mins.
The story:

My Character is a clown named Chad he is a strong as a ninja. He has a shiny gold galaxy bricks. Chad is cleaver and he can answer a question like a speed of a Lamborghini. He has big blue shiny smart galaxy eyes. Chad is a Mt Everest climber like Sir Edmund Hillary who made the beautiful galaxy purple dollar note. He has a shiny, green , ancillary , small hot ears like those who have small hot ears, a hot ear is like a pepper.

The  mountain is clear like fresh water. It is 9x thicker than ice, snow and dry ice. The mountain is smooth than a chunk of clear blue ice and snow. It is fresh than a fresh clear no sugar water that smell delicious. The mountain is 9x colder than dry if you dare to touch it. It has ice that is 6x colder than ice, snow, dry ice and cold liquids. The ice is clear and you can see what is under the ice.

Chad was living in a mountain his mountain was super duper cold he was wearing a warm leather after he sawed something weird he was thinking like a nerd and he silently said to himself is it the 2 brother he thinked. After they were having battle to each other. Then Chad were started to destroy the two brother with all his power. After the battle Chad was angry because of the 2 brothers trying to destroy mountain and now I finally rid of them.

After he was cleaning his place after he put his sword in is sword case and attach it on his back after he went to the top of the mountain because he wants to see the mountain view after he was saying to himself that why did i kill the 2 brothers after chad’s heavenly god was speaking to him after his god spoked “why did you kill the 2 brother”. “Because they were destroying my place and me” Chad repiled.

After Chad went to his house above the mountain.  

He was drinking hot chocolate with marshmallow in his house.

And he went to the bottom to see the fireworks. He went up to sing and sleep with his headphones.

This activity was good and awesome.