I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Monday 17 December 2018
My beast description
For this activity we have to go on a few sites and you have to watch a video about fantastic beast after you have to describe what your beast is gonna be ike you have to use good adjectives in your description like this one.
Hello David! Your beast sounds interesting, I really liked the detail you put into the description. He sounds very unique with the different features he has. I liked the figurative language for sharper than a pencil tip. Would you bring your imaginary beast to life? Keep it up!
Hello David! Your beast sounds interesting, I really liked the detail you put into the description. He sounds very unique with the different features he has. I liked the figurative language for sharper than a pencil tip. Would you bring your imaginary beast to life? Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora David,
ReplyDeleteA camel face for the dragon, incredible! Just thinking about that now, it's pretty impressive!
I'd love to see this beast! I like your simile too about its claws being sharper than a pencil tip. Good imagery!
Do you like writing and creating stories? I think you'd be great at it!
I hope you continue with the blogging David, it's been great!
Lee