I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Tuesday 17 December 2019
SLJ/Day 2/Activity 2
For this activity we had to write a poem about how you felt when you set foot on the moon. I picked acrostic poem. My word was moon. Melody, Orbital, Observation and Nasa
Hi David this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
Kia ora Chris! How are you doing? I'm super hungry!
Thank you for your blog post! I think you've got a super groovy poem right there! I think the poem format is really cool. I like how you used some lengthy, scientific words in your work. It really makes me feel like I'm on the moon! Why did you choose melody? How does that relate to the moon for you? Is it because you plan to sing when you're on the moon? Ka pai on all your effort and keep up the great work!
Hi David! This activity you did was great. Great job on completing this activity. What was the hardest part of this activity? Blog you later! ~ Florence
Hi David this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Chris! How are you doing? I'm super hungry!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your blog post! I think you've got a super groovy poem right there! I think the poem format is really cool. I like how you used some lengthy, scientific words in your work. It really makes me feel like I'm on the moon! Why did you choose melody? How does that relate to the moon for you? Is it because you plan to sing when you're on the moon? Ka pai on all your effort and keep up the great work!
Can't wait to see more of your blog posts!
Over and out,
Olive :)
Hi David!
ReplyDeleteThis activity you did was great. Great job on completing this activity. What was the hardest part of this activity?
Blog you later!
~ Florence